Well, an attempt to write a poem churned up politics, God help me !!
Political alchemy
Don’t shout
Put things on flame
Fumes rise
Use ashes to cover the shame
Beat someone
Its good if he dies
If dead are none
There’s room for lies
Inflict pain
The more you do
The more you inflict
The more you gain
Skull hunting
That’s the new game
Use blood for painting
Shed it and make your name
4 comments:
Highly laconic in its style. Aptly defines ur thought, and acts as a satire on our current political system. The tendency of making the innocent public a scapegoat always, with a sadist attitude looms large, and is so entwined, dat now it feels as if our politics has existed like this forever.
Oh, i Forgot to mention the 'xxtra' special cutie, the cartoon strips..I bet, the creative team of Amul has not been innovative but has been consistently innovative which is hard to find. Love the actors created by them... n nice choice of politics related cartoon, after the heavy poem !!!
if this was an attempt to write on politics..then its a good one..keep the anger and the anguish locked in..this will be your fuel in wht you want to do..
and if this was an attempt to write a poem just like that..pathik bawaaa!!! life is multi-dimensional.. kuch kar apna.. a date with marathe seems to be the perfect remedy :P marathe would agree
pathik, the poem is brilliant to say the least, really really long unkempt hair [referably braided and a long beard kissing the earth would make you a great heavy metalloid despite your built.
keep it up.
keep em comin'
when the comments pour
thats when you start rockin'
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